Louise's Composition

Louise is a little girl 10 years old "whovrote a cornposition latelyon "The Deer." It ran like this : "The deer has long horns. The deer has four feet. 'The deer has slender legs. " And so on. Her teacher read this aloud and asked Louise if shé did not think it had a peculiar sound and that it might be improved by re-svriting. Louise quite agi-eed and took the paper to her desk. By and by she returned it. Now it read : ' 'Long horns has the deer. Foui feet has the deer. Slender legs has the